Crazy

13 02 2011
You’re stuck in my head,
what will I do?
Wherever I look,
all I see is you
You have the power to stir my emotions
That puts me in a swirling confusion
You make me angry
You make me sad
You make me happy
You make me laugh
At your sight,
my world goes in slow motion
In your face,
my lips grin without any notion
Even your name creates agitation
In such a way, I can’t find the reason
It makes my heartbeat fast
It makes my normal breathing stop
A qualified heart attack
With all these things you do to me
You seem to be everything
Please tell me, what else can you bring?
Because now I wonder, without you how will I be?

Its one late Saturday morning while in church that this poem suddenly popped in my head. ย So I immediately grab my notebook (that I always bring now for times like this) and pen (that I always bring no matter what) and wrote it all down. ๐Ÿ™‚

I have been willing myself to write a poem ever since but I just always end up getting tired of staring at my clean sheet of paper. ย And then this happened. ย It just popped out, just like that! ๐Ÿ˜€

The title is because I can’t think of anything else…or maybe I just really am crazy. ๐Ÿ™‚

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6 responses

14 02 2011
superjessleong

awwhh!! thats so awesome ๐Ÿ™‚ keep writinG!

14 02 2011
AvesChordata

Haha! Thanks! ๐Ÿ™‚ I’ll wait for another “pop” in my head. ๐Ÿ™‚

15 02 2011
katy

cool!!! nice J

i hope i can write too haha

15 02 2011
AvesChordata

of course you can, Katy… I mean, you do know how to write your name, right? ๐Ÿ˜€

13 04 2011
:) & :D & โ™ฅ « aveschordata

[…] my little crazy composition? ย It’s […]

30 01 2012
yLYL

I can relate J! haha!

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